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A live sport event you watched before

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I want to talk about the recent world cup final match between France and Croatia. The match was held in Russia at the Luzhniki Stadium. this is the highest and most competitive football league in the world I am especially looking forward to watching this match as i am a huge fan of croatia football team i have been looking forward to this game for a long time. The begging this match, we played badly and struggled to get out of the way of being too much behind. Meanwhile, France is in very good form and dominated this match. The atmosphere was tense, the players of both teams played with determination and high spirits. However, about 17 minutes, a French player had a free kick and headed the goal. and the next day around 27 minutes croatia team had a counterattack when striker Ivan was the scorer. Then a foul by our team caused the French team to have 1 penalty. griezmann had a penalty kick to give France a 2-1 lead. and then the game dominated and led us 4-1 and we only managed to get one back. the match ended with a score of 4-2 in favor of France which made me very sad but I am also very proud because today our team did their best. Even though my team lost, it still left an emotional match.
I want to talk about the recent world cup final
match
between France and Croatia. The
match
was held
in Russia at the
Luzhniki
Stadium.
this
is the highest and most competitive football league in the world I am
especially
looking forward to watching this
match
as
i
am a huge fan of
croatia
football
team
i
have been looking forward to this game for a long time. The begging this
match
, we played
badly
and struggled to
get
out of the way of being too much behind. Meanwhile, France is in
very
good
form and dominated this
match
. The atmosphere was tense, the players of both
teams
played with determination and high spirits.
However
, about 17 minutes, a French player had a free kick and headed the goal.
and
the
next
day around 27 minutes
croatia
team
had a counterattack when striker Ivan was the scorer. Then a foul by our
team
caused the French
team
to have 1 penalty.
griezmann
had a penalty kick to give France a 2-1 lead.
and
then the game dominated and led us
4-1 and
we
only
managed to
get
one back.
the
match
ended with a score of 4-2 in favor of France which made me
very
sad
but
I am
also
very
proud
because
today
our
team
did their best.
Even though
my
team
lost, it
still
left
an emotional
match
.
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IELTS essay A live sport event you watched before

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