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Write about the following topic: Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your o v.6

: Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. with this statement? 6
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about keeping their residence and their job environment clean. However, whether people should tidy up their accomodation and workplace, with everything organized in the correct place is a controversial issue. My view is that it is very essential to keep your accommodation and work organisation tidy. First, it is irrefutable that it is better for you to work or live in clean atmosphere and environment. For example, when you return apartment after hard-working day, it is really terrible for you to see everything in your house unorganized, and you will have to clean these messes and you may have no strength to tidy up them, as a result, it makes you have no motivation or enough health and time to refresh your mind and relax to be ready for tomorrow. Moreover, the clear and clean residence and company may give you inspiration and motivation to work more and earn more. To illustrate, if you keep your house or company always tidy, you will make no sense to clean and have more time to concentrate on your workspace. Besides, when your house and workplace are tidy up with everything are in their exact place, you can know accurately where the things you want quickly without a hindrance, and it will not cost you any time or health, which you can use to achieve more, learn more and earn higher incomes. Therefore, it is much better, from my perspective, to keep your accomodation and corporation clean with everything is in an organized place. In conclusion, it depends on your situation to keep your accomodation and job environment tidy, but I still think it is always better for you to tidy up your mansion and enterprise in almost certain circumstances.
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are concerned
about keeping their residence and their job environment
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.
However
, whether
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should
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up their
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accomodation
and workplace, with
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everything
organized in the correct place is a controversial issue. My view is that it is
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very
essential to
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keep
your accommodation and work
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organisation
tidy.

First
, it is irrefutable that it is better for you to work or
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live
in
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clean
atmosphere and environment.
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, when you return apartment after
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hard
-working day, it is
really
terrible for you to
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see
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everything
in your
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house
unorganized, and you will
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have to
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clean
these messes and you may have no strength to
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tidy
up them,
as a result
, it
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makes
you have no motivation or
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enough
health and time to refresh your mind and relax to be ready for tomorrow.

Moreover
, the
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clear
and
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clean
residence and
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company
may give you inspiration and motivation to work more and earn more. To illustrate, if you
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keep
your
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house
or
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company
always
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tidy
, you will
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make
no sense to
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clean
and have more time to concentrate on your workspace.

Besides
, when your
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house
and workplace are
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tidy
up with
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everything
are in their exact place, you can know
accurately
where the things you want
quickly
without a hindrance, and it will not cost you any time or health, which you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
to achieve more, learn more and earn higher incomes.
Therefore
, it is much better, from my perspective, to
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keep
your
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accomodation
and corporation
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clean
with
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everything
is in an organized place.

In conclusion
, it depends on your situation to
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keep
your
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accomodation
and job environment
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tidy
,
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but
I
still
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think
it is always better for you to
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tidy
up your mansion and enterprise in almost certain circumstances.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay : Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. with this statement? 6

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
295 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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