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Write about the following topic: Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

: Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. with this statement v. 3

In this era of globalisation, usage of computer machines are growing rapidly. Some individuals are of the opinion that invention of computer systems are considered to be very important for last 100 years. I tend to agree with the statement at a greater extent. Considering the statement. Information technology systems has reduced human efforts in doing various activities and output is measured as less human errors. It is, nowadays, a large system which retains information and data permanent and retrives the same when it is considered necessary. Moreover, Computers are now being used in each filed such as an education line. It has a greater impact in the education system because it helps educational resources now can be shared electronically from one location to another at cost. People can communicate effectively through the system and it may be audio or video. In addition to that, computers machines are also used at retail and wholesale shops for maintaining stock records and for the purpose of customers billing. Inspite of having various benefits, it has various health issues like more working on computer systems, eyes become dry and human mind gets tired easily. It is also a major reason of eye-sight weak. Moreover, its usage at working places results in unemployment of human workers because computers has now come in place of individuals and they have to loose their jobs. In conclusion, as per my opinion, that computer is considered to be best source for doing not only office activities but all one. Aritifical intelligence is also based on computer. With the help of computers, Business man widen their areas in doing the business.

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important
 for last 100 years. I tend to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the statement at a greater extent. Considering the statement.

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systems
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reduced
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system
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retrives
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system
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because
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system
 and it may be audio or video. In addition
 to that, computers machines are also
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used
 at retail and wholesale shops for maintaining stock records and for the purpose of customers billing.

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Inspite
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systems
, eyes become dry and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpersonalanimalmortal
human
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gets
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. It is also
 a major reason of eye-sight weak. Moreover
, its usage at working places results in unemployment of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpersonalanimalmortal
human
 workers This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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now
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come
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individuals and
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have to
Did you mean "lose" (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?lose
loose
 their jobs.

In conclusion
, as per my opinion, that computer is considered
 to be best source for doing not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 office activities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 all one. Possible spelling mistake found.Artificial
Aritifical
 intelligence is also
 based on computer. With the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of computers, Business This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 widen their areas in doing the business. 