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Write about the following topic. It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from v.22

It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? 22
Many people across the globe believe, it is a stupendous idea to create a dress code in the workplace. However, I partly agree with this statement and believe that dressing depends on the nature and types of job. Productivity and responsibility of an individual are not linked with outfit, what he or she wears. To begin with, there are certain roles and responsibilities in professional world which needs a proper dressing sense and add more values to their day-to-day chore. For instance, a salesman is always on the run and meet with people of different nations and regions. Their attire has nothing to do with their daily output, but may leave a good or bad impression and could affect social interaction, which is highly essential in the field of sales. In the sector of aviation, it is mandatory to follow dress code. Well-dressed air hostess and flight steward attract customers and bring more revenue for the airline company. Setting up an environment of formal fabric in a corporation will add umpteen benefits to work surrounding, like it will minimize the feeling of inferiority and boost up discipline. On the other hand, professionals like computer operator who spend an enormous amount of time in front of the screen and deals mainly with internal staff, his output is not going to be affected by outfit. There are several other jobs like delivery boy, tea boy, coordinator and draftsmen where accomplishment and progress of task is not connected with the attire. To conclude, prior creating and implementing any rule of garment an organization shall look into every side and gives more weightage to social relation.
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Many
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people
across the globe believe, it is a stupendous
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idea
to create a dress code in the workplace.
However
, I partly
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agree
with this statement and believe that dressing depends on the nature and types of job. Productivity and responsibility of an individual are not linked with outfit, what he or she wears.

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begin
with, there are certain roles and responsibilities in professional world which needs a proper dressing sense and
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add
more values to their day-to-day chore.
For instance
, a salesman is always on the run and
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meet
with
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people
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different
nations and regions. Their attire has nothing to do with their daily output,
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leave
a
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good
or
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bad
impression and could affect social interaction, which is
highly
essential in the field of sales. In the sector of aviation, it is mandatory to follow dress code. Well-dressed air hostess and flight steward attract customers and bring more revenue for the airline
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company
. Setting up an environment of formal fabric in a corporation will
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add
umpteen benefits to work surrounding, like it will minimize the feeling of inferiority and boost up discipline.

On the other hand
, professionals like computer operator who spend an enormous amount of time in front of the screen and deals
mainly
with internal staff, his output is not going to be
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affected
by outfit. There are several other jobs like delivery boy, tea boy, coordinator and draftsmen where accomplishment and progress of task is not connected with the attire.

To conclude
, prior creating and implementing any
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rule
of garment an organization shall look into every side and gives more weightage to social relation.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? 22

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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