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Write about the best decision you've ever made.

Write about the best decision you've ever made. wmePl
We must have a decision in our life and it begins when we were a child. The description of the best decision from a child view is choose a beautiful thing that her/his friends do not have the same one. Therefore we like to have a good decision to bring others emotions. Everyone have some good decisions in his life and based on the result of them his has been life effectively changed. However these choices help him to have a good improvement but they are not a golden decision. Without any doubt, we have a golden choice in our life that causes a revolution in our life and divide our life into two sections as before and after this golden decision. The golden point in my life that I can mentioned it as a revolution point is directly related to my marriage. I can describe my actual life when I decide to get married. After marriage, I found the meaning of time and noticed that the speed of the passing time. Then, it helped me to have a good plan for my life and being a useful man. Based on this plan, I achieved many things in my life. I could receive a PhD in mechanical engineering based on help of my wife. The marriage help me to improve my good features and personality. As well as it changed my attitude to the life and I could share my life with other person and in some cases ignored my requests and perform my wife and my daughter’s wants. So, we can have a golden decision in our life which help us to change our life and have a revolution. Based on this choice, we can find surprising things in our personality that we do not have any information about them. Therefore, this decision can help us to growing up these surprising things. I hope everyone have this golden time in life.
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from a child view is
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thing that her/his friends do not have the same one.
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Therefore
we like to have a
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good
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decision
to bring others emotions.

Everyone
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good
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decisions
in his
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life
and based on the result of them his has been
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life
effectively
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changed
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these choices
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him to have a
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improvement
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they are not a
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decision
. Without any doubt, we have a
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choice in our
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life
that causes a revolution in our
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life
and divide our
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life
into two sections as
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decision.

The
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point in my
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that I can
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it as a revolution point is
directly
related to my marriage. I can
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describe
my actual
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life
when I decide to
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get
married. After marriage, I found the meaning of time and noticed that the speed of the passing time. Then, it
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helped
me to have a
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good
plan for my
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life
and being a useful
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man
. Based on this plan, I achieved
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things in my
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life
. I could receive a PhD in mechanical engineering based on
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help
of my wife. The marriage
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help
me to
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improve
my
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good
features and personality.
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as it
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changed
my attitude to the
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life
and I could share my
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life
with other person and in
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cases
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my requests and perform my wife and my daughter’s wants.

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, we can have a
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in our
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which
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us to
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change
our
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life
and have a revolution. Based on this choice, we can find surprising things in our personality that we do not have any information about them.
Therefore
, this
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us to growing up these surprising things. I hope everyone
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this
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time in
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IELTS essay Write about the best decision you've ever made.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
322 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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