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Write about one of the most important news that changed deeply your life and your plans.

Write about one of the most important news that changed deeply your life and your plans. 7Ym5

Quarantine was the most news in my life. For, I made a plan very much, but I couldn't do any of them. Because covid-19 virus was spreaded in our country. And all works, fabrics, banks were closed, studies were stopped in the schools, universities. All people were opressed from virus around the whole world. People lost their work, they need food, money, clothes. I couldn't learn well my subjects during the quarantine. The lessons were online during the quarantine. Internet used to work well in my village. But I learned solve the problems myself.

Quarantine was the most news in my life. For, I made a plan This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I couldn't do any of them. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
covid-19
 virus was Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "spread", the past tense form of the verb 'spread'?spreadspreader
spreaded
 in our country. And all works, fabrics, banks were closed
, studies were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceaseddiscontinued
stopped
 in the schools, universities. All This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 were Possible spelling mistake found.pressedoppressedo pressed
opressed
 from virus around the whole world. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 lost their work, they need food, money, clothes. I couldn't learn well my subjects during the quarantine. The lessons were online during the quarantine. Internet This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to work well in my village. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I learned This verb is used with the infinitive: "to solve"to solve
solve
 the problems myself. 