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Write about one of the most important news that changed deeply your life and your plans.

Write about one of the most important news that changed deeply your life and your plans. 7Ym5
Quarantine was the most news in my life. For, I made a plan very much, but I couldn't do any of them. Because covid-19 virus was spreaded in our country. And all works, fabrics, banks were closed, studies were stopped in the schools, universities. All people were opressed from virus around the whole world. People lost their work, they need food, money, clothes. I couldn't learn well my subjects during the quarantine. The lessons were online during the quarantine. Internet used to work well in my village. But I learned solve the problems myself.
Quarantine was the most news in my life. For, I made a plan
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much,
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I couldn't do any of them.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid-19
virus was
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spreaded
in our country. And all works, fabrics, banks
were closed
, studies were
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stopped
in the schools, universities. All
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people
were
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opressed
from virus around the whole world.
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People
lost their work, they need food, money, clothes. I couldn't learn well my subjects during the quarantine. The lessons were online during the quarantine. Internet
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used
to work well in my village.
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But
I learned
This verb is used with the infinitive: "to solve"
solve
the problems myself.

IELTS essay Write about one of the most important news that changed deeply your life and your plans.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
94 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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