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Describe your trip to the Samarkand

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Three years ago, I went to Samarkand with my parents. Samarkand is located about 180 kilometres from Kashkadarya. Samarqand is one of the historical cities like Guliston and Khorezm. We sent about 2 hours to get there. As for Samarkand is a famous it's large areas of historical monuments. All building in Samarkand are build in cultural style and it can show our the great history. A lot of pilgramage places are located in the Samarkand, for instance; Registan, Goʻr Amir mausoluem, Shohi zinda, Ulugʻbek medresse and et cetera. I said that All things in Samarkand are amazing. In addition, We met Nozima from Nishan in Kashkadarya. We talked about experience our experiment during the trip. In my opinion, that is an interesting trip for us.
Three years ago, I went to Samarkand with my parents. Samarkand
is located
about 180
kilometres
from
Kashkadarya
.
Samarqand
is one of the historical cities like
Guliston
and
Khorezm
. We
sent
about 2 hours to
get
there.
As
for Samarkand is a
famous
it's large areas
of historical monuments. All building in Samarkand are build in cultural style and it can
show
our the great history.
A lot of
pilgramage
places
are located
in the Samarkand,
for instance
;
Registan
,
Goʻr
Amir
mausoluem
,
Shohi
zinda
,
Ulugʻbek
medresse
and
et cetera
. I said that All things in Samarkand are amazing.
In addition
, We met
Nozima
from
Nishan
in
Kashkadarya
. We talked about experience our experiment during the trip. In my opinion,
that is
an interesting trip for us.
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IELTS essay Describe your trip to the Samarkand

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