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Write about myself and Introduce myself

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To begin with, I'm a person with an ambition to learn more about anything in the world that will be a reason to improve myself. I'm Sami Alanazi. I'm 18 years old. I'm from Saudi Arabia. my hometown is called Hafar Albatin. I have been living there for about 18 years. I live with my parents. I have one sister and one brother. We have an amazing relationship. I want to be a successful chemical engineering, due to the fact that I'm interested in reading books about chemistry. Although I'm in love with chemistry, I'm passionate about physics and math. I am looking forward to improving my English skills more and more, so I decided to move to UK to pursue that goal. What about my favorite hobby? I especially like football, whenever, I have a chance to get together with my friends I go out with them.
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with, I'm a person with an ambition to learn more about anything in the world that will be a reason to
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myself. I'm Sami
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Alanazi
. I'm 18 years
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'm from Saudi Arabia.
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my
hometown
is called
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Hafar
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Albatin
. I have been living there for about 18 years. I
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live
with my parents.
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I
have one sister and one brother. We have an amazing relationship. I want to be a successful chemical engineering, due to the fact that I'm interested in reading books about chemistry. Although I'm in
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love
with chemistry, I'm passionate about physics and math. I am looking forward to improving my English
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skills
more and more,
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so
I decided to
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move
to UK to pursue that goal. What about my favorite hobby? I
especially
like football, whenever, I have a chance to
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together with my friends I go out with them.
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IELTS essay Write about myself and Introduce myself

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  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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