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Nowadays, many old people are suffering from less respect by young generations comparing to past. What are the reasons of this problem? How could it be tackled?

Nowadays, many old people are suffering from less respect by young generations comparing to past. What are the reasons of this problem? How could it be tackled? mX9y8
It is irrefutable that lack of respect to elderly people has already become an added complication. In this case, there are different related reasons along with solutions behind this ongoing difficulty. This essay will make an effort to explain associated root causes together with some ways to approach the problem. There are many reasons why young generations do not pay attention to the aged. One reason behind increasing the number of people who suffer from less respect is having problems adapting to ever-changing lifestyles, as a result of which they are not able to work under a lot of pressure. This means that they lag behind the times and so recieve insufficient respect. In addition, most elderly men feel out of place in the techno-savvy world of today. Consequently, it may significantly increase the risk of health problems such as diabetes, arthritis which make them physically weak and so they lack respect. Another big reason is that nearly all of old people nag and criticize adults who belong to global culture. Many young people do not want to take in the right meaning these advices and youngsters will ignore them. Moreover, adults can not separate their time for care and respect their elderly because of their work. As a consequence, this situation may considerably increase the number of old-age homes in the cities. Taking everything into account, young generations should pay attention to their grandparents. One day, adults will too age and they tend to be cared for them.
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to elderly
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people
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has
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, there are
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different
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reasons
along with solutions behind this ongoing difficulty. This essay will
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make
an effort to
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explain
associated root causes together with
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some
ways to approach the problem.

There are
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many
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reasons
why young generations do not pay attention to the aged. One
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reason
behind increasing the number of
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people
who suffer from less
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respect
is having problems adapting to ever-changing lifestyles,
as a result
of which they are not able to work under
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a lot of
pressure. This means that they lag behind the times and
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so
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recieve
insufficient
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respect
.
In addition
, most elderly
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men
feel out of place in the techno-savvy world of
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today
.
Consequently
, it may
significantly
increase the
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risk
of health problems such as diabetes, arthritis which
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make
them
physically
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weak and
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so
they lack respect.

Another
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big
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reason
is that
nearly
all of
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old
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people
nag and criticize adults who belong to global culture.
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Many
young
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people
do not want to take in the right meaning these advices and youngsters will
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ignore
them.
Moreover
, adults can not separate their time for care and
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respect
their elderly
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because
of their work. As a consequence, this situation may
considerably
increase the number of
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old
-age homes in the cities.

Taking everything into account, young generations should pay attention to their grandparents. One day, adults will too
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age and
they tend to
be cared
for them.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, many old people are suffering from less respect by young generations comparing to past. What are the reasons of this problem? How could it be tackled?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
249 words
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