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Discuss the constructive and destructive uses of modern community device

Discuss the constructive and destructive uses of modern community device Ql5Y1

We all are in the global village. New technology have introduce many type of communication devices to the world. For instance mobile phone, tablets, laptop, digital watches, televisions etc. today in our socity very close to modern communication device. Even pandemic situation in the world make a necessary requirement of communication device. But it make both merits and demerits to the wold. Some one are argue for that. Therefore in my essay will discuss what are the negative and positive concequences of my own postulate. To beging with obviously we all are know modern communication devices give several advantages for the world and society. It’s easy to access any where

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introduce
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many type
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communication
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devices
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watches
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today
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very
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communication
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device
. Even pandemic situation in the world This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
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communication
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device
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But
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make
 both merits and demerits to the wold. Did you mean "Someone"?Someone
Some one
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argue
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Therefore
 in my essay will discuss what are the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
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concequences
 of my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 postulate.

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beging
 with obviously
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know
 modern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransmissionintelligencedeliveryconversationconnectioncontact
communication
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devices
 give several advantages for the world and society. It’s easy to access Did you mean "anywhere"?anywhere
any where