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Hah suu3id idhhw bshsbs jfueu kdoeiejhd wjhwvd s rhwbe

Hah suu3id idhhw bshsbs jfueu kdoeiejhd wjhwvd s rhwbe w7eyn
GISHA TEHRAN IRAN 2ⁿᵈ OCTOBER, 2021 DEAR GIORGIO, WELL, I’M SO HAPPY THAT YOU DON’T HAVE ANY PROBLEM WITH YOUR NEW ACCOMMODATION. REGARDING YOUR QUESTION, I HAVE TO SAY YES, WE HAVE A FAST WI-FI CONNECTION IN EACH ROOM. NEVERTHELESS, IT SOMETIMES SLOWS DOWN. THE FOOD IS NOT BAD EITHER. HOWEVER, IT’S NOT AS GOOD AS HOMEMADE FOOD. MY ROOM IS NOT VERY HUGE, BUT IT’S OK FOR A COLLEGE STUDENT LIKE ME. BESIDES, I HAVE WONDERFUL ROOMMATES WHO NEVER LET ME DOWN.
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GISHA


TEHRAN

IRAN

2ⁿᵈ
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "OCTOBER 2021".
OCTOBER, 2021


DEAR GIORGIO,

WELL, I’M
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SO
HAPPY THAT YOU DON’T HAVE ANY

PROBLEM WITH YOUR NEW ACCOMMODATION.

REGARDING YOUR QUESTION, I
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HAVE TO
SAY YES,

WE HAVE A
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FAST
WI-FI CONNECTION IN EACH

ROOM.
NEVERTHELESS
, IT
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SOMETIMES
SLOWS

DOWN. THE FOOD IS NOT
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BAD
EITHER.
HOWEVER
,

IT’S NOT AS
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GOOD
AS HOMEMADE FOOD. MY

ROOM IS NOT
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VERY
HUGE,
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BUT
IT’S OK FOR A

COLLEGE STUDENT LIKE ME.
BESIDES
, I HAVE

WONDERFUL ROOMMATES WHO NEVER
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LET
ME

DOWN.
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IELTS essay Hah suu3id idhhw bshsbs jfueu kdoeiejhd wjhwvd s rhwbe

Essay
  American English
13 paragraphs
83 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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