Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

write about lower secondary school

write about lower secondary school Dw8y7
My name is Hieu. I study at Nguyen Trai Secondary School. I had to learn a lot of things at school. I have four or five lessons a day and a lot of homework. Regarding tests and exams, I have different categories including oral test, 15 minute test, 45 minute test anlike some things at school, it's recess. There is only a short interval between classes, only about 5 minutes. Besides, we have to do exercise in the afternoon when it's quite hot. Honestly, I really like my school, I like the teachers, the friends and the school's collective activities.
My name is
Possible spelling mistake found.
Hieu
. I study at Nguyen
Possible spelling mistake found.
Trai
Secondary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
School
. I had to learn
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
things at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have four or five lessons a day and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
homework. Regarding
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tests
and exams, I have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
categories including oral
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
test
, 15 minute
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
test
, 45 minute
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
test
Possible spelling mistake found.
anlike
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
things at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
, it's recess. There is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
a short interval between classes,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
about 5 minutes.
Besides
, we
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
do exercise in the afternoon when it's quite hot.
Honestly
, I
really
like my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
, I like the teachers, the friends and the school's collective activities.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay write about lower secondary school

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts