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Write about 'Health' as much as you can.

Write about 'Health' as much as you can. WgWq0
In our complicated life, we want happiness, wealth and health. They are really popular in our world. Among them, health is the most important in people's routine. If we are not healthy, we can't got happiness and aslo wealth. That's why we should take care our body and mind. We should eat fresh meat, fruit and vegetables on balance. And aslo we need to do exercise like workout, aerobic, yoga, zumba and other. If you can't do heavy exercise, just do running or walking. And the last one is that we should sleep before 12 pm and don't get late. So they are the healthy tips for our happy life.
In our complicated life, we want happiness, wealth and health. They are
really
popular in our world. Among them, health is the most
important
in
people
's routine. If we are not healthy, we can't
got
happiness and
aslo
wealth. That's why we should take care our body and mind. We should eat fresh meat, fruit and vegetables on balance. And
aslo
we need to do exercise like workout, aerobic, yoga,
zumba
and other. If you can't do heavy exercise,
just
do running
or walking. And the last one is that we should sleep
before
12 pm and don't
get
late.
So
they are the healthy tips for our happy life.
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IELTS essay Write about 'Health' as much as you can.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
110 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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