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First of all, education is an important tool, which is very useful in everyone’s life. Education is what separates us from other living beings on earth, moreover it makes man the smartest creature on earth. It improves our knowledge, skills, confidence levels and personality. It is the path to social development, economic development and technological development, additional it can understand us easily and helps to deal with any problem. Without education we are incomplete and our lives are useless. Schooling is very important in everyone’s life, because of the entire education is divided into three parts, such as primary education, secondary education and higher secondary education. These three divisions of education have their own distinct importance and benefits.

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