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Write about buy a fashion thing.

Write about buy a fashion thing. 7rjEA

I've been interested in fashion lifestyle since I was a Young person, I've always followed the new collection of famous clothes companies and also I've read car magazines. I was really into sports cars too. And I hoped to buy a sports car. I remember three years ago I decided to buy a sports car but I didn't have enough money so I loaned some money from my father and a bank to buy it. At least I could buy a luxurious Hyundai Coupe. It was fashion car at that time. A great car with lots of features including powerful engine, automatic transmission, six airbags, and a lot of bottoms to control everything. I liked it. I had it for six months and I drove it every day. One day when I was driving in the street suddenly my phone rang and when I wanted to answer it I had an accident with another car in front of me. It was terrible because when I saw my car it damaged badly. I was disappointed because I knew, I didn't have enough money to repair it and I had to sell it for much less than I paid finally. I've discovered that having a stylish lifestyle is different than following it. I think having a luxurios lifestyle cost a fortune to and you don't spend much money when you aren't rich enough.

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 in fashion lifestyle since I was a Young person, I've always followed the new collection of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 clothes This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 and also
 I've read You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 magazines. I was really
 into sports You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 too. And I hoped to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasebargainacquisitioninvestment
buy
 a sports car.

I remember three years ago I decided to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasebargainacquisitioninvestment
buy
 a sports You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I didn't have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
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money
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I loaned This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 from my father and a bank to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasebargainacquisitioninvestment
buy
 it. At least I could You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasebargainacquisitioninvestment
buy
 a luxurious Hyundai Coupe. It was fashion You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 at that time. A great You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 with lots of features including powerful engine, automatic transmission, six airbags, and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 bottoms to control everything. I liked it. I had it for six months and I drove it every day. One day when I was driving in the street suddenly
 my phone rang and when I wanted to answer it I had an accident with another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 in front of me. It was terrible This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 it damaged badly
. I was disappointed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I knew, I didn't have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 to repair it and I had to sell it for much less than I paid finally
.

I've discovered that having a stylish lifestyle is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
Did you mean 'different "from"? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.from
than
 following it. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 having a Possible spelling mistake found.luxuriousluxuries
luxurios
 lifestyle cost a fortune to and you don't spend much You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 when you aren't rich This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
. 