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Planing the development is important

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There are so many people like to plan everything in the world. I am one of the those people too. To make a plan is a good way to live well. Everyone who plans their works spends their time productively and their lives will be orderly. Because they know what to do. Such people is not lazy. For example, my big goal is learn English very well. For that I have to do a lot of tasks, read books in english and watch english movies. I also have to do housework and child rearing. I need a good day plan to do all these works. In my opinion living without a plan is a chaotic life.
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IELTS essay Planing the development is important

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
116 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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