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Write about an imaginary day and your daily chores in that day

Write about an imaginary day and your daily chores in that day KG029

I wake up at 7: 00 o’clock every day but I get up around 7: 30 o’clock. I set my clock ring on 7: 00 o’clock but I never get up at this time. I snooze my clock rings several times even sometimes I be late to go to work after 8: 00 o’clock. This is very awful for my wife and I damages her sleep in the morning and I sad for this action and I was decided frequently to leave this bad routine in my life. Before Corona Pandemic, my wife and son woke up every morning soon and we ate breakfast together but now more than one years, school classes are online and my son class start at 9: 00 o’clock and this caused I do not eat breakfast with my family, so I eat a biscuit with a cup of tea in work. I write some note of my works that I must do them and usually schedule specific time for them doing. Sometimes this is happening but sometimes with the first telephone from one of my project stakeholders my plan completely changes and I go to solving this new problem. Often, suddenly afternoon arrive and I do not do my scheduled duty. In this time, after work time that most staffs go home and my telephone do not ring, I stay at work and start to do the uncompleted works.

I wake up at 7: 00 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalarmtimer
o’clock
 every day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 up around 7: 30 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalarmtimer
o’clock
. I set my clock ring on 7: 00 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalarmtimer
o’clock
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 up at this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 snooze my clock rings several You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
 even This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 I be late to go to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 after 8: 00 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalarmtimer
o’clock
. This is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 awful for my wife and I The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "damage"damage
damages
 her sleep in the morning and I Did you mean "said"?said
sad
 for this Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).action, and
action and
 I was decided
frequently
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 routine in my life.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
 Corona Pandemic, my wife and son woke up every morning Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).soon, and
soon and
 we ate breakfast together This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 more than Don't use the number 'one' with plural words. Did you mean "one year", "a year", or simply "years"?one yeara yearyears
one years
, school classes are online and my son This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 at 9: 00 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalarmtimer
o’clock
 and this caused I do not eat breakfast with my family, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I eat a biscuit with a cup of tea in work.

I write This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 note of my works that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 do them and usually
 schedule specific You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 for them doing. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
Sometimes
 this is happening This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 with the first
 telephone from one of my project stakeholders my plan completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 and I go to solving this new problem.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
Often
, suddenly
 afternoon arrive and I do not do my scheduled duty. In this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
, after You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 that most staffs go home and my telephone do not ring, I stay at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 to do the uncompleted works. 