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an international event in my field.

an international event in my field. VQEV7

Some month ago, I received an email from a French company about an international event in my field. That was a free webinar in English language and I was hesitate for participate that because my English skills were not good. Firstly, I sent answer for that email and said I want to attend for the webinar then waited to receive answer from French company. Someday later, I received an email again and I allowed to attend the webinar. Now I must become ready to test my English ability seriously. In the webinar, there were some professor from several countries that spoke about KYC and because of my knowledge in this field I understood specific technical words but unfortunately I did not understood sentences completely. I was disappointed and I felt fail. I got that my English listening was weak. This day I decided to improve my English Vocabulary first. Then I must Strengthen listening skill but I did not reach completely to this goal by self-study. Finally, I found that I must work English language with an expert teacher.

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, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
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company
. Someday later, I received an email again and I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
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Now
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 become ready to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 my English ability seriously
.

In the webinar, there were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 professor from several countries that spoke about KYC and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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but
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understood
 sentences completely. I was disappointed
 and I felt fail.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 that my English listening was weak. This day I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 my English Vocabulary first
. Then I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
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skill
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but
 I did not reach completely to this goal by self-study. Finally
, I found that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 work English language with an expert teacher. 