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kids do not enjoy their time with parents anymore. many people think this is due to lack of attention, other believe phones and internet

kids do not enjoy their time with parents anymore. many people think this is due to lack of attention, other believe phones and internet MlBpQ
the modern generation is tough to handle when it comes to behavioral problems or anxiety issues. things often get complicated and, if proper guidance is not provided may lead to dreadful consequences. Nowadays children face negativity and offense in school and play place. in the UK faces the majority numbers of bully cases than, other nations. an infant finds it hard to overcome such mental strain. this pressure and strain leads to depression and even result in serious trauma.
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to behavioral problems or anxiety issues.
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complicated and, if proper guidance is not provided may lead to dreadful consequences. Nowadays children face negativity and offense in school and play place.
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the UK faces the majority numbers of bully cases than, other nations.
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IELTS essay kids do not enjoy their time with parents anymore. many people think this is due to lack of attention, other believe phones and internet

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