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Write about an event you like (100 to 150 words)

Write about an event you like (100 to 150 words) ORXqk
Being an introvert, I usually would rather keep myself at home than participate in activities and events. But it will be heartless if I say I do not care about any events of my country. Over a period of many years, starting from the war era, Vietnamese people have always been creating and reserving plenty of marks which has become the legacy for their children nowadays. And one of the most memorable events that have been marked is "The Covid 19 prevention of Vietnam" in 2020. It begins from the outbreak of this pandemic which has brought countless death tolls is extremely dangerous, it puts heavy pressure on the governments and the citizens and makes our daily life cannot be more difficult. But on the bright side, throughout many discussions and declarations of providing more knowledge about this virus for people, this event has been completed successfully and marked as the deep-seated and historical memory of every Vietnamese
Being an introvert, I
usually
would
rather
keep
myself at home than participate in activities and
events
.
But
it will be heartless if I say I do not care about any
events
of my country. Over a period of
many
years, starting from the war era, Vietnamese
people
have always been creating and reserving
plenty
of marks which has become the legacy for their children nowadays. And one of the most memorable
events
that have
been marked
is
"
The
Covid 19
prevention of Vietnam
"
in 2020. It
begins
from the outbreak of this pandemic which has brought countless death tolls is
extremely
dangerous
, it puts heavy pressure on the
governments
and the citizens and
makes
our daily life cannot be more difficult.
But
on the bright side, throughout
many
discussions and declarations of providing more knowledge about this virus for
people
, this
event
has
been completed
successfully
and marked as the deep-seated and historical memory of every
Vietnamese
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IELTS essay Write about an event you like (100 to 150 words)

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