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Write about an event you like (100 to 150 words)

Write about an event you like (100 to 150 words) ORXqk

Being an introvert, I usually would rather keep myself at home than participate in activities and events. But it will be heartless if I say I do not care about any events of my country. Over a period of many years, starting from the war era, Vietnamese people have always been creating and reserving plenty of marks which has become the legacy for their children nowadays. And one of the most memorable events that have been marked is "The Covid 19 prevention of Vietnam" in 2020. It begins from the outbreak of this pandemic which has brought countless death tolls is extremely dangerous, it puts heavy pressure on the governments and the citizens and makes our daily life cannot be more difficult. But on the bright side, throughout many discussions and declarations of providing more knowledge about this virus for people, this event has been completed successfully and marked as the deep-seated and historical memory of every Vietnamese

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events
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
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events
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, it puts heavy pressure on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
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 and the citizens and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
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many
 discussions and declarations of providing more knowledge about this virus for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
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