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ONE THING YOU NEED IN LIFE Everyone needs at least one ambition to succeed in life. Without a goal you will not have a settle destination, or a peace ending for your own chapter because there is nothing that satisfies you, or makes you feel like you have accomplished yourself. It also applies for me, and since I am still a student, the main goal right now I wanted to achieve is to be fluent in French. It all started when I stepped in secondary school. I have always found France is the most elegant and gorgeous city of all. I dreamed about travelling to France, eating croissants, and observing Eiffel Tower from beneath of it. For it all to work out, I have to learn French even though it is not necessary, but I want to understand their culture fully. It is fascinating to listen to people communicate using French, and I believe that will be me in the future. One of my awful traits is I am not persevere. I give up easily most of the time, mainly in education, and sports. Surprisingly this time, in these few months I have been taking French online classes, listening to French music, and reading French short stories. I have never been this ambitious in my life. My parents, especially my dad have always wanted me to learn a second language. I think he is going to be proud when he hears this. I hope it will be a sustainable factor for my future. It is not something that will happen once in my life. I wanted to grow my French speaking skills, and pronunciations like a native. Furthermore, I will set more ambitions to improve myself, start a new chapter, and end it joyfully.
ONE THING YOU NEED IN LIFE

Everyone needs at least one ambition to succeed in life. Without a goal you will not have a settle destination, or a peace ending for your
own
chapter
because
there is nothing that satisfies you, or
makes
you feel like you have accomplished yourself. It
also
applies for me, and since I am
still
a student, the main goal right
now
I wanted to achieve is to be fluent in French.

It all
started
when I stepped in secondary school. I have always found France is the most elegant and gorgeous city of all. I dreamed about travelling to France, eating croissants, and observing Eiffel Tower from beneath of it. For it all to work out, I
have to
learn French
even though
it is not necessary,
but
I want to understand their culture
fully
. It is fascinating to listen to
people
communicate using French, and I believe that will be me in the future.

One of my awful traits is I am not
persevere
. I give up
easily
most of the time,
mainly
in education, and sports.
Surprisingly
this time, in these few months I have been taking French online classes, listening to French music, and reading French short stories. I have never been this ambitious in my life. My parents,
especially
my dad have always wanted me to learn a second language. I
think
he is going to be proud when he hears this.

I hope it will be a sustainable factor for my future. It is not something that will happen once in my life. I wanted to grow my
French speaking
skills
, and pronunciations like a native.
Furthermore
, I will set more ambitions to
improve
myself,
start
a new chapter, and
end
it
joyfully
.
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IELTS essay Write about an ambition that you have.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
294 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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