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Write about a work of art

Write about a work of art 53A8p
Art is a way to express one’s emotion, and Leonardo da Vinci’s infamous painting “Mona Lisa” has truly captured person’s facial expression. The painting had been believed to be painted between 1503 and 1506 and since then, Mona Lisa has been one of the most valuable painting in the world. As stunning a paiting it is, Leonardo da Vinci’s infamous painting is still a subject to debate, especially surrounding Mona Lisa’s smile. An examination of the Mona Lisa in the present day reveals that the painting has indeed had better days. The original color of the painting appears faded and is almost gone and this is perhaps the reason why the original painting has been repainted at least three times. The painting does not appear to be clean and this can be observed in the greenish glaze on the painting. The repainting of the painting and the greenish glaze makes the painting somewhat different from what Leonardo originally painted. In a bid to understand the Mona Lisa, artists have continued to question the identity of Mona Lisa. The famous painting is currently being exhibited in the Louvre museum, Paris, in a temperature and humidity controlled box that has been embedded in concrete. And every year or even day, millions of people flock the museum to have a look at Mona Lisa “Mona Lisa” is a very stunning painting with amazing and realisitic facial expression, especially the smile that has remained debatable for decades. If I have the chance to visit Paris, I would really want to see this infamous paiting myself.
Art is a way to express one’s emotion, and Leonardo da Vinci’s infamous
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painting
“Mona Lisa” has
truly
captured person’s facial expression. The
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painting
had
been believed
to
be painted
between 1503 and 1506 and since then, Mona Lisa has been one of the most valuable
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painting
in the world. As stunning a
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paiting
it is, Leonardo da Vinci’s infamous
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painting
is
still
a subject to debate,
especially
surrounding Mona Lisa’s smile.

An examination of the Mona Lisa in the present day reveals that the
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painting
has
indeed
had better days. The original color of the
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painting
appears faded and is almost gone and this is perhaps the reason why the original
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painting
has
been repainted
at least three times. The
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painting
does not appear to be clean and this can
be observed
in the greenish glaze on the
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painting
.
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The
repainting of the
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painting
and the greenish glaze
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makes
the
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painting
somewhat
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different
from what Leonardo
originally
painted. In a bid to understand the Mona Lisa, artists have continued to question the identity of Mona Lisa. The
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famous
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painting
is
currently
being exhibited
in the
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Louvre museum
, Paris, in a temperature and humidity controlled box that has
been embedded
in concrete. And every year or even day, millions of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
flock the museum to have a look at Mona
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Lisa


“Mona Lisa” is a
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very
stunning
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painting
with amazing and
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realisitic
facial expression,
especially
the smile that has remained debatable for decades. If I have the chance to visit Paris, I would
really
want to
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see
this infamous
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paiting
myself.
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IELTS essay Write about a work of art

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  American English
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261 words
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