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Write about a visit to the zoo.Write your description

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On Monday last week we went to the Tashkent Zoo where is located near the city centre. Tashkent Zoo is well-known for its rare birds and various animals and a lot of people come there for a walk. Entering the zoo, you can see crowded people. Most of them were children and there was joy in their eyes. The voices and movements of large and small animals made us happy. We even fed some animals. For example, ostriches which are the tallest and biggest birds in the world. They made a great impression on me. We had a really great time and intended to come again.
On Monday last week we went to the Tashkent Zoo where
is located
near the city
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centre
. Tashkent Zoo is well-known for its rare birds and various animals and
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a lot of
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people
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come
there for a walk. Entering the zoo, you can
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see
crowded
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people
. Most of them were children and there was joy in their eyes. The voices and movements of large and
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small
animals made us happy. We even fed
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some
animals.
For example
, ostriches which are the tallest and biggest birds in the world. They made a great impression on me. We had a
really
great time and intended to
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come
again.
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IELTS essay Write about a visit to the zoo. Write your description

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
106 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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