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In the modern world, people can express their experiences of products or services through the internet. This development would be a positive effect on society. And this essay will discuss the reasons behind the trend.

In the modern world, people can express their experiences of products or services through the internet. This development would be a positive effect on society. And this essay will discuss the reasons behind the trend. 6dByx
Firstly, nowadays wide scope of products are available in the market, thus it is hard to track down the better one for customers. Whereas, reviews by the recent buyers will be helpful to one who is looking for top quality goods from a bunch of outcomes having the same specification. Also, people can set aside their time and money cleverly. For instance, online shopping is getting a trend in society, and when a customer needs to purchase a product online, a web page shows a product on top of the search list called a bestseller product, especially the one which attained the most number of good responses. Furthermore, reviews are constantly monitored and valued by successful manufactures, thus they can improve their product's standard to buyer's priorities and furthermore can figure out if any damage in it. Additionally, these methodologies by the companies drive them to a radical improvement in their credibility and acceptance among consumers. For instance, a few nations like China and Japan, provide their products to a number of people for testing purposes prior to mass production to discover the mistake. To conclude, reviews are consistently a beneficial development in the public, which helps the people with purchasing money worth products and furthermore for the manufactures to make their commodities efficient and improved.
Firstly
, nowadays wide scope of
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products
are available in the market,
thus
it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
down the better one for customers. Whereas, reviews by the recent buyers will be helpful to one who is looking for top quality
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
from a bunch of outcomes having the same specification.
Also
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can set aside their time and money
cleverly
.
For instance
, online shopping is getting a trend in society, and when a customer needs to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
a
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product
online, a web page
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
on top of the search list called a bestseller
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product
,
especially
the one which attained the most number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
responses.

Furthermore
, reviews are
constantly
monitored and valued by successful manufactures,
thus
they can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
their product's standard to buyer's priorities and
furthermore
can figure out if any damage in it.
Additionally
, these methodologies by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
drive them to a radical improvement in their credibility and acceptance among consumers.
For instance
, a few nations like China and Japan, provide their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
to a number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
for testing purposes prior to mass production to discover the mistake.

To conclude
, reviews are
consistently
a beneficial development in the public, which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
with purchasing money worth
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
and
furthermore
for the manufactures to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
their commodities efficient and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
.
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IELTS essay In the modern world, people can express their experiences of products or services through the internet. This development would be a positive effect on society. And this essay will discuss the reasons behind the trend.

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