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Write about a time when you decided to go on a diet

Write about a time when you decided to go on a diet KWLMM

Nowadays, keeping in shape is crucial for the majority of people. So most people go on a diet to gain or lose weight. I remember five years ago when I started working for the first time in an engineering company, I decided to follow a balanced diet rich in protein, carbohydrates and vitamins. Because I was very slim and I tried to Put on weight by this way. After a while that I kept my diet up the result has appeared obviously. for example, I felt awake and healthier than when I didn't use to have breakfast. It also made me energetic to do my duties during my work time. It was very beneficial for me. I clearly remember before I ate plenty of hi calories food I felt sleepy and tired in the morning and I think it was just because of my bad eating habits. It not only helped me to gain weight it was also helpful to my work efficiency.

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people
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 go on a diet to gain or lose weight.

I remember five years ago when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 working for the first
 time in an engineering This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
, I decided to follow a balanced diet rich in protein, carbohydrates and vitamins. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 slim and I tried to Put on weight by this way.

After a while that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 my diet up the result has appeared obviously
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for
 example, I felt awake and healthier than when I didn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 to have breakfast. It also
 made me energetic to do my duties during my work time.

It was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 beneficial for me. I clearly
 remember This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 I ate This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
 of hi calories food I felt sleepy and tired in the morning and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 eating habits. It not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 me to gain weight it was also
 helpful to my work efficiency. 