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Write about a person who influenced your career choice.

Write about a person who influenced your career choice. NWPxm

Every person once faces a choice in his life. And the most important choice is to choose one's profession. When you choose you should understand what things are you like. This fact helps you find your favorite business. I decided to study finance, banking. When I chose I advised with my parents. They supported me and all my career connecting with finance. In my opinion, when you are 17 you can't know what do you want. Many people make a lot of mistakes in their choice. In the end we have unloved job and many many psychological problems after a few years. We shouldn't fear to change our life and loking for our love business again and again until find our favorite business.

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chose I advised with my parents. They supported me and all my career connecting with finance.

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 business again and again until find our favorite business. 