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In many families today, both the parents are working. What are the advantage and disadvantage of it?

In many families today, both the parents are working. What are the advantage and disadvantage of it? 7pAnA

Undeniably, in this contemporary era, family play's an imperative role in everyone's livelihood. For completing the needs of the childrens both parents started doing work. Merits and demerits of this notion will be explained in subsequent fragments. To commence with, the main benefit of this both working guardians is that they provide a luxury lifestyle to their kids. For example, caretakers doing part time job so that they earn more money and arrange their bills and expenditures and they save the money. That savings help their childs in the future. Additionally, they are role models of their children and their kids also understand the value of money. Nevertheless, there are numerous drawbacks of this notion. Due to jobs parents spend less time with their children and mutual bonding between them become weeker. Furthermore, without any supervision the children became the part of bad groups due to that number of bad habits developed in them. In conclusion, after considering above mentioned Vistas, I think that there are more disadvantages than advantages but with proper control this thing will be neglected.

Undeniably
, in this contemporary era, family play's an imperative role in everyone's livelihood. For completing the needs of the Possible spelling mistake found.children
childrens
 both parents This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 doing work. Merits and demerits of this notion will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpreted
explained
 in subsequent fragments.

To commence with, the main benefit of this both working guardians is that they provide a luxury lifestyle to their kids. For example
, caretakers doing This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
 job This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that they earn more money and arrange their bills and Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).expenditures, and
expenditures and
 they save the money. That savings This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 their Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "children", the plural form of the noun 'child'?childrenchildchills
childs
 in the future. Additionally
, they are role models of their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 and their kids also
 understand the value of money.

Nevertheless
, there are numerous drawbacks of this notion. Due to jobs parents spend less time with their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 and mutual bonding between them become Possible spelling mistake found.weakerseekerweepermeekerweederweek er
weeker
. Furthermore
, without any supervision the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 became the part of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 groups due to that number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 habits developed in them.

In conclusion
, after considering above mentioned Vistas, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that there are more disadvantages than advantages This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 with proper control this thing will be neglected
. 