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how technology is effecting the schools .

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Education plays a crucial role in our lives. Whatever learn from the schools stays with us live long. we are living in a technical era, everyone depends on computers and laptops rather than doing it by reading books and course material. To kick-off, as per my opinion concerned, I think writing and reading has a great role in our intellectual development, moreover when we read our studying material then chances of getting health-related issues also reduces, such as eye problems and frequent headache, because it put less strain on our eyes as compared to laptops. Furthermore writing by our own hands is also helps in releasing stress and we become more creative. In addiction to it writing by pen also helps in improving out handwriting, because in future if you are applying to multinational companies for a job, if you have goodwriting, then it will be easier for you to get a job. On the other hand some people are in favour of technology, they think that it is less time consuming, when we study on computer, and moreover you can get evaluation of your assissnment quickly.
Education plays a crucial role in our
lives
. Whatever learn from the schools stays with us
live
long.
we
are living in a technical era, everyone depends on computers and laptops
rather
than doing it by reading books and course material.

To kick-off, as per my opinion concerned, I
think
writing and reading has a great role in our intellectual development,
moreover
when we read our studying material then chances of getting health-related issues
also
reduces
, such as eye problems and frequent headache,
because
it put less strain on our eyes as compared to laptops.
Furthermore
writing by our
own
hands is
also
helps
in releasing
stress and
we become more creative. In addiction to it writing by pen
also
helps
in improving out handwriting,
because
in future if you are applying to multinational
companies
for a job, if you have
goodwriting
, then it will be easier for you to
get
a job.

On the other hand
some
people
are in
favour
of technology, they
think
that it is less
time consuming
, when we study on computer, and
moreover
you can
get
evaluation of your
assissnment
quickly
.
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IELTS essay how technology is effecting the schools.

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