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Write about a bad habit and tell more details about it.

Write about a bad habit and tell more details about it. 6mqBK
I have many bad habits in the past and still now. In the past, I did many mistakes to my parents and also my best friends. Because of my bad habits, I lost my best friends. One of my bad things is selfishness. I don’t know other’s feeling and I didn’t want to know. But now, I start to try understanding the others. The second one is that I was sociopath. In the past, when I was teenager, I became sociopath and I wanted to bully only boys who try to date me or love me. And I used them for my own good and I don’t care their feeling. I also thought them as my toys and when I get bored, I throw away. So, they are my worst habits. Now, I start to know that my habits are not good and I try to fix them.
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things is selfishness. I don’t know other’s feeling and I didn’t want to know.
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to try understanding the others. The second one is that I was sociopath. In the past, when I was
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, I became sociopath and I wanted to bully
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IELTS essay Write about a bad habit and tell more details about it.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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