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The average weather in three big cities

The average weather in three big cities AJN6M

The data represents the average temperature monthly and the average hours of sunshine in three cities; London, New York, and Sydney. Sydney’s temperature starts at the highest degree among three cities in the beginning of the year at over 25 degrees while another two cities start with the cold weather. In addition, the hours of sunshine for Sydney is 2473 hours which is less than New York where as the longest hours under the sun. In conclusion, London has the coldest weather range while, New York is the warmest cities.

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