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Write about 400 words: “ To what extent do you think psychological factors play a role in approaching important examination?”

Write about 400 words: “ To what extent do you think psychological factors play a role in approaching important examination?” 66OWG
As far as we know that in almost every country, examination is one of the most popular ways to evaluate either our knowledge or abilities like national exam, test for promotion. . . and decide whether we meet all qualities that our field requires or not. Moreover, it also accompanies with various factors that significantly affect us in many aspects while taking an exam. Psychology is one of those taken into consideration seriously. From my viewpoint, psychological factor is a big issue that students at any educational levels may experience or deal with during their schoolday. It can be obviously seen that they find it extremely tough for themselves to stay calm and overcome their anxiety during an important test. Therefore, it prevents them from doing their best and leads to bad performance instead of boosting their confidence on their efforts. In addition, under pressure of time also make contribution to the mentioned state. While the time is limited, there are plenty of questions needing to be completed. That’s why it makes everything turn into confusion and many examinees may forget anything relevant to the subjects that they have revised before and can not orientate how to work out to get the right answers from the incorrect ones given to distract them. Besides that, mental health problem should not be disregarded. Generally speaking, the differences between student and student are knowledge and achievements so in order not to be left behind their friends, they put themselves under a lot of stress and become more and more obsessed with getting bad marks or failing in a exam. As a result, they easily come down with mental illnesses, which is greatly difficult for them to tackle and do well in the testing room. Last but not least, people involved in creating psychological matters for learners that is impossible not to mentioned are parents and teachers. Neither their parents nor academic lectures want to get the bad news from them since all of them have great expectation for their passing the exam with flying colours to stand a better chance to be admitted to one of the top-ranked universities. This will not only make their parents as well as teachers fully proud of them but also is considered as a thank to parents’ lofty sacrifices and teachers who are willingly to spare their valuable time to make sure that we are provided with useful knowlegde to succeed in such a crucial exam. For instance, every time I take a test, I always keep thinking that if I fail, I will be such a useless child because my parent waste a lot time and money just wants me to get well-educated. In conclusion, getting over those psychological factors while approaching in any kind of exam is very challenging so we must take meaaures to handle this problem. Although our lives are becoming more and more competitive, it is neccessary for all of us to to be aware of how to set goals that are cut out for our own abilities to prepare well and get a satisfactory result we hope to without getting into troubles belonging to psychology.
As far as we know that in almost every country, examination is one of the most popular ways to evaluate either our knowledge or abilities like national exam,
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test
for promotion.
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.
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.
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and
decide whether we
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meet
all qualities that our field requires or not.
Moreover
, it
also
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accompanies with
various factors that
significantly
affect us in
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many
aspects while taking an exam. Psychology is one of those taken into consideration
seriously
.

From my viewpoint, psychological factor is a
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big
issue that students at any educational levels may experience or deal with during their
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schoolday
. It can be
obviously
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seen
that they find it
extremely
tough for themselves to stay calm and overcome their anxiety during an
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important
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test
.
Therefore
, it
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prevents
them from doing their best and leads to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
performance
instead
of boosting their confidence on their efforts.

In addition
, under pressure of
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time
also
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make
contribution to the mentioned state. While the
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time
is limited
, there are
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plenty
of questions needing to
be completed
. That’s why it
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makes
everything turn into confusion and
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many
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examinees
may forget anything relevant to the subjects that they have revised
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before
and can not orientate how to work out to
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get
the right answers from the incorrect ones
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given
to distract them.

Besides
that, mental health problem should not
be disregarded
.
Generally
speaking, the differences between student and student are knowledge and achievements
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so
in order not to be
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left
behind their friends, they put themselves under
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a lot of
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stress
and become more and more obsessed with getting
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bad
marks or failing in
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a
exam.
As a result
, they
easily
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come
down with mental illnesses, which is
greatly
difficult for them to tackle and do well in the testing room.

Last
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but
not least,
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people
involved in creating psychological matters for learners
that is
impossible not to mentioned are
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parents
and teachers. Neither their
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parents
nor academic lectures want to
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get
the
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bad
news from them since all of them have great expectation for their passing the exam with flying
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colours
to stand a better chance to
be admitted
to one of the top-ranked universities. This will not
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only
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make
their
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parents
as well
as teachers
fully
proud of them
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but
also
is considered
as a thank to
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parents’
lofty sacrifices and teachers who are
willingly
to spare their valuable
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time
to
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make
sure that we
are provided
with useful
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knowlegde
to succeed in such a crucial exam.
For instance
, every
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time
I take a
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test
, I always
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keep
thinking that if I fail, I will be such a useless child
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because
my
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parent
waste a lot
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time
and money
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just
wants me to
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get
well-educated.

In conclusion
, getting over those psychological factors while approaching in any kind of exam is
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very
challenging
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so
we
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must
take
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meaaures
to handle this problem. Although our
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lives
are becoming more and more competitive, it is
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neccessary
for all of us
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to to
be aware of how to set goals that are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
out for our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
abilities to prepare well and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a satisfactory result we hope to without getting into troubles belonging to psychology.
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IELTS essay Write about 400 words: “ To what extent do you think psychological factors play a role in approaching important examination?”

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  American English
6 paragraphs
524 words
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