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The room I like the best in my house

The room I like the best in my house 8gOYB
Each person has a special place to belong. My wonderful place is my own bedroom. I value simplicity so my fifteen-square meter room is covered by a light green color. The whole furniture is made from wood and has existed for seventeen years since the house was built. A double bed is located close to the southwest wall. Next to it is a bookshelf filled with novels, comics, and some self-help books. It was my brilliant childhood world. Opposite the bed is my desk, where an old laptop and printer are presented. Especially, a large wooden door leading to the balcony occupies most of a wall. The unique door directs to a magical night world with sparkling stars. The quiet space in the room separates me from the noise of life. My bedroom is like a friend who is always there to share ups and downs with me after a tiring working day.
Each person has a special place to belong. My wonderful place is my
own
bedroom. I value simplicity
so
my fifteen-square meter room
is covered
by a light green color.

The whole furniture
is made
from wood and has existed for seventeen years since the
house
was built
. A double bed
is located
close to the southwest wall.
Next
to it is a bookshelf filled with novels, comics, and
some
self-
help
books. It was my brilliant childhood world. Opposite the bed is my desk, where an
old
laptop and printer
are presented
.
Especially
, a large wooden door leading to the balcony occupies most of a wall. The unique door directs to a magical night world with sparkling stars. The quiet space in the room separates me from the noise of life. My bedroom is like a friend who is always there to share ups and downs with me after a tiring working day.
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IELTS essay The room I like the best in my house

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
153 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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