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Write about 150-200 words to give your opinion on the following topic: Should smart phones be banned among students?

Write about 150-200 words to give your opinion on the following topic: Should smart phones be banned among students? m5NQ8

Nowaday, there are abundant of facilities in our life. Such as television, internet, computer, etc. But, in my opinion, telephone is one of the best invention. It has s lot of convenience. Firstly, we can use them to contact with the others in VN and around the world. For example, I use my telephone to call, chat and mail with my friend, who live in the USA. We always share the information about studying English and science. Secondly, I and my friends are them to entertain such as watching films, listening to music, surfing the Internet, etc. Espeacilly, they help us for studying. Not only advantages but also there are some disadvantages. Some of them depend on using telephone too much when they lead in addiction. Moreover, we have conversations face to face instead of looking at the telephone all the time. In conclusion, we should use smart phone in the right way and not abuse on them.

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Nowaday
, there are abundant of facilities in our life. Such as television, internet, computer, etc. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, in my opinion, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withphonedialcontactcall up
telephone
 is one of the best invention.

It has s lot of convenience. Firstly
, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 them to contact with the others in VN and around the world. For example
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withphonedialcontactcall up
telephone
 to call, chat and mail with my friend, who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in the USA. We always share the information about studying English and science.

Secondly
, I and my friends are them to entertain such as watching films, listening to music, surfing the Internet, etc. Possible spelling mistake found.Especially
Espeacilly
, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 us for studying.

Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 advantages This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 disadvantages. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 of them depend on using You use this word too often, consider replacing it withphonedialcontactcall up
telephone
 too much when they lead in addiction. Moreover
, we have conversations face to face instead
 of looking at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withphonedialcontactcall up
telephone
 all the time.

In conclusion
, we should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 smart phone in the right way and not abuse on them. 