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Do you agree or dis agree children use the computer

Do you agree or dis agree children use the computer OE9Oy

I understand this subject that, child spend time to computer and they are passactive. i think condition of society is one reason. some people were land lorad ،when the children went to out home they knew their neighbors. they had security but people are tenant, we cant know that maybe they hurt to our children. other reason is that some mother were houswife and had time to spend with their children. but parent are business today. they are always at work, when they come back to home they are tired and have not energy to spend with children. child need to childhood so they spend time in network and chating withe other guys. I think condition society and family are two important reason. my suggestion is that we cant change society condition but we can set time of our work. for example set times for children and listen to their speech. when we go to home dont speake about work. and dont forget that we were children a pastime too.

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spend
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time
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computer and
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passactive
. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 condition of society is one reason. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSome
some
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people
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lorad
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،when
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children
 went to out home they knew their neighbors. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThey
they
 had security This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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people
 are tenant, we Did you mean "can't" or "cannot"?can'tcannot
cant
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children
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOther
other
 reason is that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 mother were Possible spelling mistake found.housewife
houswife
 and had You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spend
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children
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBut
but
 parent are business This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThey
they
 are always at work, when they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back to home they are tired
 and have not energy to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spend
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children
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterChild
child
 need to childhood This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spend
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 in network and Possible spelling mistake found.chartingchasingcheatingcoatingchantingchatting
chating
 withe other guys. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 condition society and family are two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 reason. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMy
my
 suggestion is that we Did you mean "can't" or "cannot"?can'tcannot
cant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 society condition This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 we can set You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 of our work. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFor
for
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times
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children
 and listen to their speech. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhen
when
 we There isn't usually a preposition before "home". Did you mean "go home"?go home
go to home
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dont
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speake
 about work. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnd
and
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dont
 forget that we were You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 a pastime too. 