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Write a two to a three-paragraph article describing an exciting discovery. Pay attention to your use of the passive voice. Vary your sentence structure and the conjunctions you use. Your article should be 150–200 words long.

Write a two to a three-paragraph article describing an exciting discovery. Pay attention to your use of the passive voice. Vary your sentence structure and the conjunctions you use. Your article should be 150–200 words long. 0Mb7q
After the disaster of coronavirus, a positive effect on the ocean had discovered by the scientist. Pink dolphins appeared in the sea of Do Son, Hai Phong. This is a rare fish, listed in the Red Book of Vietnam at Endangered (EN), and recent years saw this dolphin species. According to the Representative of Vietnam Association for the Protection of Nature and Environment, there appeared in the ocean showed that the restoration of the marine environment, the impact of active marine fishing and the discharge of waste from "hundreds of rivers into the sea" have been better controlled. In a short time after the covid, the marine ecosystem had been improved without fishing when the whole country focus to create the vaccine protect people.
After the disaster of coronavirus, a
positive
effect on the ocean had discovered by the scientist. Pink dolphins appeared in the sea of Do Son,
Hai
Phong
. This is a rare fish, listed in the Red Book of Vietnam at Endangered (EN), and recent years
saw
this dolphin species. According to the Representative of Vietnam Association for the Protection of Nature and Environment, there appeared in the ocean
showed
that the restoration of the marine environment, the impact of active marine fishing and the discharge of waste from
"
hundreds of rivers into the sea
"
have been better controlled. In a short time after the
covid
, the marine ecosystem had been
improved
without fishing when the whole country focus to create the vaccine protect
people
.
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IELTS essay Write a two to a three-paragraph article describing an exciting discovery. Pay attention to your use of the passive voice. Vary your sentence structure and the conjunctions you use. Your article should be 150–200 words long.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
124 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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