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WRITE A STORY ABOUT ONE OF YOUR UNFORGETABLE MEMORIES IN THE CHILDHOOD

WRITE A STORY ABOUT ONE OF YOUR UNFORGETABLE MEMORIES IN THE CHILDHOOD X7A68

Childhood memories are an important part of everyone's life, it can be good or bad but we can't forget them. Then I would like to tell you a story about my childhood that changed my life. You know, in Vietnam, the University Entrance Exam is very crucial to any student's future. Therefore, all students try to study hard to get into the university they want. And last year, I took the university entrance exam. It was also an important turning point in my growth. However, during my high school years, I didn't really put in the effort to get into the college I wanted. And as a result, I failed. And then I went to the university I didn't want to go to, and my parents were very upset about it. I always blamed myself for that, until I realized that I couldn't always be said for the things I couldn't change. This event was memorable to me mainly because it was after this event I started realizing that I have to work hard for my goals, which I really lacked up until that point. Besides, it reminds me to keep trying whenever I feel tired or discouraged.

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good
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bad
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but
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tell
 you a story about my childhood that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 my life.

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University
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very
 crucial to any student's future. Therefore
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hard
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 into the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
university
 they want. And last year, I took the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
university
 entrance exam. It was also
 an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 turning point in my growth.

However
, during my high school years, I didn't really
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get
 into the college I wanted. And as a result
, I failed. And then I went to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
university
 I didn't want to go to, and my parents were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 upset about it. I always blamed myself for that, until I realized that I couldn't always be said
 for the things I couldn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
.

This This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 was memorable to me mainly
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because
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event
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started
 realizing that I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 work This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 for my goals, which I really
 lacked up until that point. Besides
, it reminds me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 trying whenever I feel tired or discouraged. 