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Students should continue their study abroad than to study at home. To what extent you agree or disagree with the statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Education is very important for live. We all know studying abroad is now a common thing. Everyone wish to go oversea for further study. I agree with the statement that student should go foreign country rather than studying at home country. Personally I believe studying overseas always add advantages to our career. We learn culture from other countries along with our study. Some times home country does not offer specialization in subjects what we want to do. If I want
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advantages to our career. We learn culture from other countries along with our study.
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times home country does not offer specialization in subjects what we want to do. If I
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IELTS essay Students should continue their study abroad than to study at home.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
79 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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