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Nowadays online shopping has become more popular than in-store shopping. Is it a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience

Nowadays online shopping has become more popular than in-store shopping. Is it a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience 708AY
In the era of modern and developed technology, nowaday number of people who prefer online shopping and services is dramatically increasing over year. Online shopping certainly affected the in-store shopping to great extend. Though I am is in the favour of such development because of various reasons. Starting with, as recently the pendemic of COVID people consider E Shopping safe than in store shoping also, people nowadays are not able to seak time for shoping in store as they are tangle in various responsibility not only that but also they are busy with their professional life. For example the online shopping website named flipkart provide a wide range of choices and offer on products, which provide many options to overcome time availability issue and their safety consern with su h pendemic environment. Furthermore this kind of easy operating system setup has overcome the major problem releted to in store purchasing such as travelling to store from distant areas, traffic and parking issues in populated areas also reduced time spending. Although there are many pros of online shopping but it has some negative effects too such as payment releted queries, fraud after shopping, such increase in e- shopping affected the small business and shopkeepers. Also some people don't believe on online shopping and don't know the procedure to Shop online. However, according to me the online shopping is more helpful in various ways and easy to do for different age groups, also the advantage outweigh disadvantages.
In the era of modern and developed technology,
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nowaday
number of
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people
who prefer
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online
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shopping
and services is
dramatically
increasing over year.
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Online
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shopping
certainly
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affected
the in-store
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shopping
to great extend.
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Though
I am is in the
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favour
of such development
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because
of various reasons.

Starting with, as recently the
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pendemic
of
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COVID
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people
consider E
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Shopping
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safe
than in
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store shoping
also
,
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people
nowadays are not able to
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seak
time for
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shoping
in
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store
as they are tangle in various responsibility not
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only
that
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but
also
they are busy with their professional life.
For example
the
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online
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shopping
website named
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flipkart
provide a wide range of choices and offer on products, which provide
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many
options to overcome time availability issue and their safety
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consern
with
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su
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h pendemic
environment.
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Furthermore
this kind of easy operating system setup has overcome the major problem
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releted
to in
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store
purchasing such as travelling to
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store
from distant areas, traffic and parking issues in populated areas
also
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reduced
time spending.

Although there are
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many
pros of
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online
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shopping
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but
it has
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some
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negative
effects
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too such
as payment
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releted
queries, fraud after
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shopping
, such increase in e-
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shopping
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affected
the
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small
business and shopkeepers.
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Also
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some
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people
don't believe on
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online
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shopping
and don't know the procedure to Shop online.

However
, according to me the
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online
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shopping
is more helpful in various ways and easy to do for
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different
age groups,
also
the advantage outweigh disadvantages.
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IELTS essay Nowadays online shopping has become more popular than in-store shopping. Is it a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience

Essay
  American English
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