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write a story about A silly mistake

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In the blink of an eye, my foolish blunder was over. I recall starting a business with a friend to sell books online. My job entailed trading, and my friend supplied merchandise. I had complete faith in her and didn't question anything she did. As a result of my steadfast faith, I had changed my mind about conducting business with pals. Because the books I was given were unofficially published. She pretended it was nothing out of the norm when she downloaded and printed e-books. I had to apologize on behalf of all customers and offered them the option of purchasing them at non-hybrid prices. They were fortunately understanding and forgave us.
In the blink of an eye, my foolish blunder was over. I recall starting a business with a friend to sell books online. My job entailed trading, and my friend supplied merchandise. I had complete faith in her and didn't question anything she did.
As a result
of my steadfast faith, I had
changed
my mind about conducting business with pals.
Because
the books I was
given
were
unofficially
published. She pretended it was nothing out of the norm when she downloaded and printed e-books. I had to apologize on behalf of all customers and offered them the option of purchasing them at non-hybrid prices. They were
fortunately
understanding and forgave us.
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IELTS essay write a story about A silly mistake

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
112 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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