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what is most interesting your home town?

what is most interesting your home town? PrPk2
my home town is famous for its coconut candy industry. because of having a lots coconut resources, residents have utilized them in order to making many popular and necessary products for our life which have got the income for people in there. in addition, the booming tourist industry is also one of the best of my home town. there are many wonderful destinations such as Con Phung, Binh Dai pagoda, etc, every years, the number of visistors coming there are very crowded. you see tourism has become one of the main resources of local economic revenue and contributes a lot to the city development. so i'm very proud of my home town.
my
home town is
famous
for its coconut candy industry.
because
of having
a lots
coconut resources, residents have utilized them in order to
making
many
popular and necessary products for our life which have
got
the income for
people
in there.
in
addition, the booming tourist industry is
also
one of the best of my home town.
there
are
many
wonderful destinations such as Con
Phung
,
Binh
Dai
pagoda, etc, every
years
, the number of
visistors
coming there are
very
crowded.
you
see
tourism has become one of the main resources of local economic revenue and contributes a lot to the city development.
so
i'm
very
proud of my home town.
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IELTS essay what is most interesting your home town?

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