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write a story about A happy celebration

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New Year's Eve is typically a joyous occasion, but the last day of the previous lunar year was particularly memorable. Traditionally, my family gathered together at home. While my dad and I were making “Banh Chung”, my mom was cleaning the house. We all felt blue because it had been two years since my brother moved to Korea to work. It cost a fortune to buy a plane ticket during Tet holiday, so we just communicated with him via phone calls. My family sat together after the reunion supper to watch the Spring Festival Gala… My parents were talking with my brother when he said that a present would be delivered to my house and then hung up. We were on the rooftop at 00: 00, watching fireworks. Suddenly, someone rang the doorbell. Outside, there was a giant suspicious gift box. We were very puzzled at first, then excited because we didn’t know what was in the box. I rushed to open it. And we all burst into tears of joy: my brother came out to the surprise of my whole family! Mom hurried to hug him, while my dad tried to hide his tears. I was completely speechless but couldn't help wearing the broadest smile.

New Year's Eve is typically
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but
 the last day of the previous lunar year was particularly
 memorable. Traditionally
, my family gathered together at home. While my dad and I were making “Possible spelling mistake found.BandBeingBankBanBathBach
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 Chung”, my mom was cleaning the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. We all felt blue This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it had been two years since my brother This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to Korea to work. It cost a fortune to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
plane
 ticket during Tet holiday, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 communicated with him via phone calls. My family sat together after the reunion supper to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 the Spring Festival Gala… My parents were talking with my brother when he said that a present would be delivered
 to my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and then hung up. We were on the rooftop at 00: 00, watching fireworks. Suddenly
, someone rang the doorbell. Outside, there was a giant suspicious gift box. We were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 puzzled at first
, then excited This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 we didn’t know what was in the box. I rushed to open it. And we all burst into tears of joy: my brother came out to the surprise of my whole family! Mom hurried to hug him, while my dad tried to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :covermask
hide
 his tears. I was completely speechless This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 couldn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 wearing the broadest smile. 