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Write a short text about some of the things that have increased during the past years. Example the reasons

Write a short text about some of the things that have increased during the past years. Example the reasons 25Xj6

Technology and its advancement bring about many changes in people's lifestyle. Take internet for instance, which has a large contribution in these events. In my view, Corona virus also helped this technology to make it more efficient. Although shopping is an integral part of people's lives, dou to this pandemic phenomenon, the world has moved on virtual shopping. It seems that, in these 2 years some companies decide to change the methods of their sells, so they advertised in other ways to inform and entice, furthermore they use the internet and its facilities. On the other hand, some online stores like Amazon has expanded and has become big and bigger, rich and richer and ultimately more popular just for attending to buy online instead of in person. Occasionally, I hope that the quality of products maintain as well good as the past for the sake of welcoming this type of purchasing.

Technology and its advancement bring about This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's lifestyle. Take internet for instance
, which has a large contribution in these This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
. In my view, The term "Coronavirus" (= disease) is spelled as one word.Coronavirus
Corona virus
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 this technology to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it more efficient. Although shopping is an integral part of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
, Possible spelling mistake found.youdodogduoDougdot
dou
 to this pandemic phenomenon, the world has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 on virtual shopping. It seems that, in these 2 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 decide to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 the methods of their sells, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they advertised in other ways to inform and entice, furthermore
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the internet and its facilities. On the other hand
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 online stores like Amazon has expanded and has become This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 and bigger, rich and richer and ultimately
 more popular This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 for attending to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 online instead
 of in person. Occasionally
, I hope that the quality of products maintain as well
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 as the past for the sake of welcoming this type of purchasing. 