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write a short paragraph about what do you do to protect your environment

write a short paragraph about what do you do to protect your environment bQRA3
Nowadays, it is necessary to protect our unpolluted environment. I don’t know about other people, but personally I which can protect environment. Firstly, I want to reduce emissions of petrol-vehicle. I usually use the public transport insist of using the car or motorbike. It make street uncrowded and emissions don’t produce more than before. By the way, I like the reuse and recycle things. They are very good for environment because they can decrease amount of rubbish and don’t affect resources. Then, I also take part in the volunteer teams. These team encourge people to protect the environment, plan more trees, collec the garbage, . . . . Finally, I always share message: “ the protection of the environment” with my family, friends, . . . . I want the sense of community is better. Because the more unpolluted environment, the better for our live.
Nowadays, it is necessary to protect our unpolluted
environment
. I don’t know about other
people
,
but
personally
I which can protect
environment
.
Firstly
, I want to
reduce
emissions of petrol-vehicle. I
usually
use
the public transport insist of using the car or motorbike. It
make
street uncrowded and emissions don’t produce more than
before
. By the way, I like the reuse and recycle things. They are
very
good
for
environment
because
they can decrease amount of rubbish and don’t affect resources. Then, I
also
take part
in the volunteer teams. These team
encourge
people
to protect the
environment
, plan more trees,
collec
the garbage
, .
.
.
.
Finally
, I always share message:
the protection of the
environment”
with my family, friends
, .
.
.
.
I want the sense of community is better.
Because
the more unpolluted
environment
, the better for our
live
.
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IELTS essay write a short paragraph about what do you do to protect your environment

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
145 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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