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write a short paragraph about looking at your future. what will, might, or should it be like? write about what you should, must, or can do now in order to make your life what you want it to be.

write a short paragraph about looking at your future. what will, might, or should it be like? write about what you should, must, or can do now in order to make your life what you want it to be. NrlOy
One of the reasons I am talking today about my future is that I am optimistic about what I will have. This means that I think what I hope will be achieved and I will get it soon. For instance, when I was studying at the university, I was hoping to study in America and worked to achieve this dream of diligence and seriousness in my studies, and here I am today in America studying the language and I will join the university soon. This means that you must work on your dreams, if small. Of course, there will be many hardships, and you will have many success enemies. Anther example, Canadian model Winnie Harlow, Winnie had vitiligo from a young age, and many were mocking her, but she did not care about these things, she always insisted that she was achieving her goals even if the entire world ridiculed her, and this means that Winnie's self-confidence is very great, to If she can overcome many obstacles on her way to success. In conclusion, the more difficulties the more eager to achieve my dreams.
One of the reasons I am talking
today
about my future is that I am optimistic about what I will have. This means that I
think
what I hope will
be achieved
and I will
get
it
soon
.
For instance
, when I was studying at the university, I was hoping to study in America and worked to achieve this dream of diligence and seriousness in my studies, and here I am
today
in America studying the language and I will
join
the university
soon
. This means that you
must
work on your dreams, if
small
.
Of course
, there will be
many
hardships, and you will have
many
success enemies. Anther example, Canadian model Winnie Harlow, Winnie had vitiligo from a young age, and
many
were mocking her,
but
she did not care about these things, she always insisted that she was achieving her goals even if the entire world ridiculed her, and this means that Winnie's self-confidence is
very
great, to If she can overcome
many
obstacles on her way to success.
In conclusion
, the more difficulties the more eager to achieve my dreams.
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IELTS essay write a short paragraph about looking at your future. what will, might, or should it be like? write about what you should, must, or can do now in order to make your life what you want it to be.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
184 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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