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Write a short introduction about how happy your are v.1

Write a short introduction about how happy your are v. 1
I am not sure where to start with this introduction as if I plan on taking you on a journey that becomes drawn out and enveloping, circling around the last decade to bringing about a story of mystery and disdain for most, otherwise, a simple life, leveraging a charm like mindedness putting disgrace to any zero-sum game, but that approach would seem ill-fruitful because it would suggest an otherwise show of intent, yet when in reality, it is sketched with suffering, a will of survival and a childlike curiosity, shuffling through Lego’s to spaceships in a colossal ideation of power and expression, a distinct illustration more metaphoric than a Tom and Jerry Sunday morning binge watching cartoon session where one character is dumber than the latter in their own right and distracts the former through their own ill-guided in-genius methods of enslavement which tears apart the narrative of each, resulting in a tragedy within forming in both characters as consequential as the innocence being enthralled from behind the view tube, acting as an innocent bystander with their own roles played out, and with a turn of a knob, becoming an active agent in and of themselves, jerked from either wall, appealing to Tom and or Jerry’s simplistic entrapment, but what keeps the three engaged is not their outwitting approaches to the latter or the former, but failing to identify to each and their own tragedy from within themselves when spelled out by the author as an error which is mispronounced but very pronounced by the actors, lingering somewhere between understood and mistook with an approach that would suggest white or black, but color blind to a grey area where the lines are crossed, admiring a landscape of beauty laden with trees, grasslands and a path stretching across the horizon as the Sun glimmers above all with purpose to show promise, an instinctive explanation of a war zone of misfortune, pock-marked with gaping bleeding wounds, a trail indicative of a clear understanding with total disregard to an agent’s weaponized approach, but this introduction would be too simple and instead, I feel I need to write with more of a resultant where the Lego’s scatter and a spaceship launches, extracting through a made up atmosphere, envisioned only by myself and with that, I would like to say thank you as this pleasantry has been written in such a way that would spell disbelief and intersecting enough, while all our paths in life are different, opportunities at relative are indifferent and choices imperfect, it is important noting our finite amount of resources should be leveraged, exhausted and pursued, bringing about the most optimal outcomes without inclination to others, all while navigating that line which is acceptable and tiptoeing that is not, hiding in front of a mask that would otherwise offend the majority or a few holding a stature position that is well-defined well beyond their ignorance to a degree that most can not resolve, digest, nor even approach a marital understanding of what has been aspirated as of this very moment, and inversely, we can apply the antonyms via an asymptote that we are special, chosen, irreplaceable, forethoughtful, and unlucky, painting an all guided intent showing respect to our positions, a glaringly obvious thank you that should be accepted as normal as the public’s thought process similar to a small hit of charcoal in the ER, or NARCAN in the fast lane, parked, on the freeway as EMS pulls you back from the edge, all in anticipation for you to wake up with your little weeds watching from the backseat, eager to get back to their Tom and Jerry view tube only interpreting this slight inconvenience as a roadblock with traffic backed up several miles behind while mommy and or daddy takes a little nap, them little weeds sure grew fast as in them cute little weeds in your neighbors yard and sprinkling with care, a loving dose of seedlings, dandelions, in hopes they gather potent flowers and in charity, present them with roundup in the most honest intentions and a bible study, dropping little seedling invitations to facilitate discussion that not all good things are good, pure or simple as in this current resultant, only increasing the verbiage and complexity for sheer entertainment, losing the reader somewhere between the ignorance, and the labyrinth of language with disdain for the reader likened to giggling, giggle, giggle, gaggle, and hurray for today and yesterday while we take a moment to prey on the future, characterized somewhere between the past and the present with candor hollow eyes because real and fake are like honesty and fallacy is to smile and frown but either or are cloaked as is which leaves only the faint-hearted left in a disillusioned state, sheltered from, and thus leading an unassuming unoriginal life glazed over, happy only to maintenance of the status quo with no challenge to an outright lie, lying somewhere between a peer-pressure and loss of with causation encoded, echoing through a socialization process that is a consequence not right nor entirely wrong, it is just what it is, a product losing sight of causation and consequence, ignoring the fact that they are not equals but are at correlation to a parallel dichotomy, a by-product of one, the reader, public and agent, for all intents and purposes, are three in the same, an active coach into an outlier’s socialization process, yet my intention is to vilify your complacency in anything other than a bias groupthink, echo chambered by a few and accepted by most without argument as I would hope to see you again rarely in such contemplation as in my paranoia is justified taking fact from present, woven into reality, and your paranoia is justified to a delusion, taking fact from pretend that is justified as reality, a matter of how one works through it at interjection, similar to causation, as is the delusion a product of oneself, nature or negative experiences and thus a safety mechanism, highlighting that reality is subjective, conceding tremendous amount of futility through measuring a magical ability, assessing your limitations in objectivity, considering all of your wizardry is condensed to your socialization process as average and is exceptional to an acute angle, not exceeding two degrees past zero, igniting nowhere close to an all-encompassing perception, biased to complexity and thus falling short to simple compassion when no explanation obvious only, and then find malevolence in your perplexed ignition to the degree that wasn’t understood at initial prognosis anyway by your in-attendance but had your attendance been mandated to coerced to enlightenment all-encompassing biased perplexity would have lost most if not all fallacy inter-woven into your current niggard subjective reproach because in all honesty you are lucky, unspecial, ill-chosen and replaceable which has been represented overwhelmingly justifiable in this introduction as curt as possible.
I am not sure where to
start
with this introduction as if I plan on taking you on a journey that becomes drawn out and enveloping, circling around the last decade to bringing about a story of mystery and disdain for most,
otherwise
, a
simple
life, leveraging a charm like mindedness putting disgrace to any zero-sum game,
but
that
approach
would seem ill-fruitful
because
it would suggest an
otherwise
show
of intent,
yet
when in
reality
, it
is sketched
with suffering, a will of survival and a childlike curiosity, shuffling
through
Lego’s to spaceships in a colossal ideation of power and expression, a distinct illustration more metaphoric than a Tom and Jerry Sunday morning binge watching cartoon session where one character is dumber than the latter in their
own
right and distracts the former
through
their
own
ill-guided in-genius methods of enslavement which tears apart the narrative of each, resulting in a tragedy within forming in both characters as consequential as the innocence
being enthralled
from behind the view tube, acting as an innocent bystander with their
own
roles played out, and with a turn of a knob, becoming an active agent in and of themselves, jerked from either wall, appealing to Tom and or Jerry’s simplistic entrapment,
but
what
keeps
the three engaged is not their outwitting
approaches
to the latter or the former,
but
failing to identify to each and their
own
tragedy from within themselves when spelled out by the author as an error which
is mispronounced
but
very
pronounced by the actors, lingering
somewhere
between understood and mistook with an
approach
that would suggest white or black,
but
color blind to a grey area where the lines
are crossed
, admiring a landscape of beauty laden with trees, grasslands and a path stretching across the horizon as the Sun glimmers
above all
with purpose to
show
promise, an instinctive explanation of a war zone of misfortune, pock-marked with gaping bleeding wounds, a trail indicative of a
clear
understanding with total disregard to an agent’s weaponized
approach
,
but
this introduction would be too
simple
and
instead
, I feel I need to write with more of a resultant where the Lego’s scatter and a spaceship launches, extracting
through
a made up atmosphere, envisioned
only
by myself and with that, I would like to say thank you as this pleasantry has
been written
in such a way that would spell disbelief and intersecting
enough
, while all our paths in life are
different
, opportunities at relative are indifferent and choices imperfect, it is
important
noting our finite amount of resources should
be leveraged
, exhausted and pursued, bringing about the most optimal outcomes without inclination to others, all while navigating that line which is acceptable and tiptoeing
that is
not, hiding in front of a mask that would
otherwise
offend the majority or a few holding a stature position
that is
well-defined well beyond their ignorance to a degree that most can not resolve, digest, nor even
approach
a marital understanding of what has
been aspirated
as of this
very
moment, and
inversely
, we can apply the antonyms via an asymptote that we are special, chosen, irreplaceable, forethoughtful, and unlucky, painting an all guided intent showing respect to our positions, a
glaringly
obvious thank you that should be
accepted
as normal as the public’s
thought
process
similar to a
small
hit of charcoal in the ER, or NARCAN in the
fast
lane, parked, on the freeway as EMS pulls you back from the edge, all in anticipation for you to wake up with your
little
weeds watching from the backseat, eager to
get
back to their Tom and Jerry view tube
only
interpreting this slight inconvenience as a roadblock with traffic backed up several miles behind while mommy and or daddy takes a
little
nap, them
little
weeds sure grew
fast
as in them cute
little
weeds in your neighbors yard and sprinkling with care, a loving dose of seedlings, dandelions, in hopes they gather potent flowers and in charity, present them with roundup in the most honest intentions and a bible study, dropping
little
seedling invitations to facilitate discussion that not all
good
things are
good
, pure or
simple
as in this
current
resultant,
only
increasing the verbiage and complexity for sheer entertainment, losing the reader
somewhere
between the ignorance, and the labyrinth of language with disdain for the reader likened to giggling, giggle, giggle, gaggle, and hurray for
today
and yesterday while we take a moment to prey on the future, characterized
somewhere
between the past and the present with candor hollow eyes
because
real and fake are like honesty and fallacy is to smile and frown
but
either or
are cloaked
as is which
leaves
only
the faint-hearted
left
in a disillusioned state, sheltered from, and
thus
leading an unassuming unoriginal life glazed over, happy
only
to maintenance of the status quo with no challenge to an outright lie, lying
somewhere
between a peer-pressure and loss of with causation encoded, echoing
through
a socialization
process
that is
a consequence not right nor
entirely
wrong
, it is
just
what it is, a product losing sight of causation and consequence, ignoring the fact that they are not equals
but
are at correlation to a parallel dichotomy, a by-product of one, the reader, public and agent, for all intents and purposes, are three in the same, an active coach into an outlier’s socialization
process
,
yet
my intention is to vilify your complacency in anything other than a bias groupthink, echo chambered by a few and
accepted
by most without argument as I would hope to
see
you again rarely in such contemplation as in my paranoia
is justified
taking fact from present, woven into
reality
, and your paranoia
is justified
to a delusion, taking fact from pretend that
is justified
as
reality
, a matter of how one works
through
it at interjection, similar to causation, as is the delusion a product of oneself, nature or
negative
experiences and
thus
a safety mechanism, highlighting that
reality
is subjective, conceding tremendous amount of futility
through
measuring a magical ability, assessing your limitations in objectivity, considering all of your wizardry
is condensed
to your socialization
process
as average and is exceptional to an acute angle, not exceeding two degrees past zero, igniting nowhere close to an all-encompassing perception, biased to complexity and
thus
falling short to
simple
compassion when no explanation obvious
only
, and then find malevolence in your perplexed ignition to the degree that wasn’t understood at initial prognosis anyway by your in-attendance
but
had your attendance
been mandated
to coerced to enlightenment all-encompassing biased perplexity would have lost most if not all fallacy inter-woven into your
current
niggard subjective reproach
because
in all honesty you are lucky, unspecial, ill-chosen and replaceable which has
been represented
overwhelmingly
justifiable in this introduction as curt as possible.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
38Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
One language sets you in a corridor for life. Two languages open every door along the way.
Frank Smith

IELTS essay Write a short introduction about how happy your are v. 1

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
1141 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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