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i admit that i am a film junkie, i love spending my free time watching film at home. There is a film that i rewatch many times without getting bored. The cartoon name is The Lion King that produced by Walt Disney. The main character is Simba- the son of Mufasa. After his father died by uncle. Sime roamed and living free life until adulhood. However, in his heart always have responsibility, he want to return homeland. When he come back home, the kingdom desolation with the raging of wicked hyenas. However, Simba met his mother that help he has more power and he won and rule the kingdom. What impressed me about the movie. It is the surround with beautiful artwork, with incrediably talented voice actors. In addition, i also love the lesson in it. The family love, responsibility, honor that all the underlie.

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 admit that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 am a film junkie, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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love
 spending my free time watching film at home. There is a film that i Possible spelling mistake found.rematch
rewatch
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 times without getting bored. The cartoon name is The Lion King that produced by Walt Disney. The main character is Simba- the son of Possible spelling mistake found.MuffsMughalMucosa
Mufasa
. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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 his father This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :passed away
died
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 roamed and living free life until Possible spelling mistake found.adulthood
adulhood
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, in his heart always have responsibility, he The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "wants", "wanted".wantswanted
want
 to return homeland. When he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back home, the kingdom desolation with the raging of wicked hyenas. However
, Simba met his mother that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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power and
 he won and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
 the kingdom. What impressed me about the movie. It is the surround with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 artwork, with Possible spelling mistake found.incredibly
incrediably
 talented voice actors. In addition
, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 the lesson in it. The family This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
, responsibility, honor that all After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'underlie' is correct. If 'underlie' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
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