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Whether the employers think that people with formal academic qualifications are more important than over other aspects or not remains controversial

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Whether the employers think that people with formal academic qualifications are more important than over other aspects or not remains controversial. Personally, i amin agreement with their point and this essay will analyse the obvious advantageous points. The option to start the academic qualifications seems to be equipment in regards to measuring the quality of knowledge. The claim is substantiated by university graduates, students need to experience an abundance of tests and some probations which permit students to have a knowledge pivotal to their field. On the other hand, people who have life experience or personal qualities also have less knowledge of their field. As a result, it wastes multiple time to ameliorating skill and training. Consequently, it makes more and more employers not recruit. Additionally, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to follow their studies. According to experts, students in university have new insights into their field and have more opportunities. For example, they have more knowledge about the doctor and they will become a good doctor and work at a big hospital in the future. As a matter of fact, thank to trend that people more and more study university and it ameliorate numerous a quality education. In conclusion, employers choosing people who have an academic qualification is a good idea, which has an essential need to improve education and permit the development of the country.
Whether the employers
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people
with formal academic qualifications are more
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important
than over other aspects or not remains controversial.
Personally
, i
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amin
agreement with their point and this essay will
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analyse
the obvious advantageous points.

The option to
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start
the academic qualifications seems to be equipment
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
measuring the quality of
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knowledge
. The claim
is substantiated
by university graduates,
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students
need to experience an abundance of
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tests
and
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some
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probations
which permit
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students
to have a
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knowledge
pivotal to their field.
On the other hand
,
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people
who have life experience or personal qualities
also
have less
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knowledge
of their field.
As a result
, it wastes multiple time to ameliorating
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skill
and training.
Consequently
, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
more and more employers not recruit.

Additionally
, I believe that it is more beneficial for
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students
to follow their studies. According to experts,
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students
in university have new insights into their field and have more opportunities.
For example
, they have more
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knowledge
about the
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
doctor and
they will become a
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good
doctor and work at a
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big
hospital in the future. As a matter of fact, thank to trend that
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people
more and more study university and it
Did you mean "ameliorates"?
ameliorate
numerous a quality education.

In conclusion
, employers choosing
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people
who have an academic qualification is a
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good
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idea
, which has an essential need to
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improve
education and permit the development of the country.
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IELTS essay Whether the employers think that people with formal academic qualifications are more important than over other aspects or not remains controversial

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
231 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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