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Many countries face several problems of students behaviour

Many countries face several problems of students behaviour 8LDBr
In this contemporary world, most of the schools often faces many problems regarding student behaviour. In some countries youngsters might misbehave with their teachers and other students. Although it has many causes still it have some solutions also. To commence with, most of the teachers often faces the rude behaviour of the youngsters. Primarily, nowadays most of children represents aggressive and rude behaviour with their tutor. The Predominant factor of this is, frustration and stress. For instance, most of students have their own family problems such as divorce of their parents. They might get frustrated due to their family problems. Secondly, some students follow their parents behaviour they act according to their parents which create a huge change in their behaviour and might encourage them to misbehave with their teachers. Apparently most of the students are careless with their studies and they are also not attentive in their class which effect on their grades as well as on the reputation of the institution. On its flip side, it has some solutions also. Parents are the first teacher of their children. It is the responsibility of the parents to teach them some moral ethics and behaviour. Moreover, parents should have to behave well and good in front of their children, so that it would create a good impact on their child. Not only parents but school should also be responsible to handle student's behaviour they may curb this problem by taking some serious steps. For example, by allotting a strict teacher and by making some strict rules and guidelines for students. Subsequently, both parent and school could bring a huge change in youngsters behaviour by making them comfortable and by providing good environment for study. To sum up, indubitably, many schools face several problems with students behaviour in my opinion parents play major role in childrens' life. They can flexible their child behaviour by teaching them moral ethical and values.
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behaviour
. In
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countries youngsters might misbehave with their
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faces the rude
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behaviour
of the youngsters.
Primarily
, nowadays
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most of children
represents aggressive and rude
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behaviour
with their tutor. The Predominant factor of this is, frustration and
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stress
.
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have their
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family
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problems
such as divorce of their
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parents
. They might
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get
frustrated due to their family
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students
follow their
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behaviour
they act according to their
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parents
which create a huge
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change
in their
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behaviour
and might encourage them to misbehave with their
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teachers
.
Apparently
most of the
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students
are careless with their
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studies and
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also
not attentive in their
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which effect on their grades
as well
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solutions
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of their children. It is the responsibility of the
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parents
to teach them
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moral ethics and
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behaviour
.
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impact on their child. Not
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should
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behaviour
they may curb this
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serious steps.
For example
, by allotting a strict
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teacher
and by making
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strict
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and guidelines for
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students
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, both
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parent
and
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school
could bring a huge
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change
in youngsters
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behaviour
by making them comfortable and by providing
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good
environment for study.

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indubitably
,
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schools
face several
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with
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students
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behaviour
in my opinion
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parents
play major role in
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childrens
' life. They
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can flexible
their child
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behaviour
by teaching them moral ethical and values.
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IELTS essay Many countries face several problems of students behaviour

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
5.5
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