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I missed the day that I went on a holiday after we finished the final test with my friends after we finished the final test a few years ago. It’s one of the most famous places that all the people living in Vietnam know, it’s Vung Tau. A beautiful beach with white sand sparkling in the sun. On my trip with my friends, we got up extremely early because we were excited to take a walk along the beach, build a sand castle and take a chance to get a deep breath in the fresh air. One thing that makes me love this beach is when I finished swimming, I started to collect the seashells on the seaside. It was kind of fun. Vung Tau is a nice place to visit, I really high-commend to go on a trip. I would love to go back again.
I missed the day that I went on a holiday after we finished the final
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with my friends after we finished the final
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test
a few years ago. It’s one of the most
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famous
places that all the
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people
living in Vietnam know, it’s
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Tau. A
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beautiful
beach with white sand sparkling in the sun. On my trip with my friends, we
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up
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because
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were excited
to take a walk along the beach, build a sand castle and take a chance to
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get
a deep breath in the fresh air. One thing that
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me
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this beach is when I finished swimming, I
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started
to collect the seashells on the seaside. It was kind of fun.
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Tau is a nice place to visit, I
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IELTS essay Write a review about somewhere you have recently visited.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
146 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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