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The way people communicating

The way people communicating LqO36
In the past, people didn't have many way to communicate with others. The most popular ways were meeting face to face and writting letter, but writting letter was so inconvenient because it took a long time and the letter might be lost. Over time, the way of communication has changed. Now, mobile devices and internet have developed and people like using moble phone and other device to communicate, by making phone, video calling, messaging, email, . . .
In the past,
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to communicate with others. The most popular ways were meeting face to face and
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writting
letter,
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but
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writting
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so
inconvenient
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because
it took a long time and the letter might
be lost
. Over time, the way of communication has
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changed
.
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Now
, mobile devices and internet have developed and
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people
like using
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moble
phone and other device to communicate, by making phone, video calling, messaging, email
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IELTS essay The way people communicating

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
78 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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